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*Hornbacher Wraiths Sig - shadyshoelace - 10-10-2019
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Welcome to the squad @PDXBaller!
*Hornbacher Wraiths Sig - PDXBaller - 10-10-2019
Beautiful blue and black!
*Hornbacher Wraiths Sig - Eco - 10-20-2019
4/5: The render work is top notch. I don't really like how the smoke effect looks. I wish you picked a thicker font at least for the player name.
*Hornbacher Wraiths Sig - shadyshoelace - 10-20-2019
(10-20-2019, 01:14 PM)Eco Wrote:4/5: The render work is top notch. I don't really like how the smoke effect looks. I wish you picked a thicker font at least for the player name.
@Eco thanks for the grade. Can you elaborate a bit on what could have been done to make it look better, or what isn't doing it for you?
*Hornbacher Wraiths Sig - Eco - 10-20-2019
The only reason I didn't give this a 5 is the text. I just don't like how this light font looks, it makes the text feel like an afterthought. I can ask someone else to take a second look if you like.
*Hornbacher Wraiths Sig - shadyshoelace - 10-20-2019
(10-20-2019, 09:15 PM)Eco Wrote:The only reason I didn't give this a 5 is the text. I just don't like how this light font looks, it makes the text feel like an afterthought. I can ask someone else to take a second look if you like.
Thank for the response! I wouldn't mind getting another opinion, but I don't really have an issue with the grade, just looking to keep learning and improving. I did make a conscious decision to go with a thinner script font for this one, but I totally get if it didn't turn out well.
*Hornbacher Wraiths Sig - Eco - 10-20-2019
Honestly I love thinner/lighter fonts, especially the ones that look like handwriting. However using them as the primary font for sigs don't work well. If you were to use a thicker font for the players name and then keep the thinner font for the team name/position, it would have looked better.