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*Sean O'Leary Sig - Blueline - 11-03-2019 *Sean O'Leary Sig - Nokazoa - 11-07-2019 3/5 700k. The render work is really good with some minor flaws. You left the Vikings text on the helmet and you could have cleaned out the NFL patches on the pants and jersey. Personally, I'm fine with leaving the patches, but some graders pointed it out so I felt I had to also. I think you have a lot of elements that work well together. The text is much better than your previous sig, but I also don't feel the logo brings much to the overall piece. If you took it out and made the logo larger and shifted around the composition you could have been given a higher score. However, the current text placement does allow more depth since it overlaps the hand so that's important. Lastly, we felt that you could have added something over the piece. The contrast between the render and the background skirts the line on too much and it loses some of its depth. I think a vignette that covers the piece could have worked to solve this. Any questions or just want more critiques? Don't be afraid to message me!