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*Siddhu Sarvepally - RB Sig - siddhus - 12-11-2019 This is the first sig i have ever made so hopefully you like it. [https://imgur.com/a/44WBmhU *Siddhu Sarvepally - RB Sig - scorycory - 12-11-2019 *Siddhu Sarvepally - RB Sig - Bigred1580 - 12-11-2019 That is very good for a first sig! I love it! Keep it up! *Siddhu Sarvepally - RB Sig - Nokazoa - 12-27-2019 2.5/5 550k I gave you a bonus for it being your first sig, and you have a good understanding of what you need to do. However, various elements need some refinement. Composition: You usually don't want things square in the middle. You can, but in this case (with all that empty space), I think you could either move it over off center or enlarge the render to where the head is somewhat cut off from the top. I also think you could have blended the render and background more. It feels more like the render is sitting on top of the background instead of being a cohesive piece. Render: Your render is high quality, but it lacks a swap and the cut needs to be refined (see around the players right arm). Background: I like the split paint look you have going for it, but I also find the wood's color and the white splotches draw the eye away from the render. Perhaps a darker color or black overlay on low opacity? Text: I like the idea of the text and how it repeats itself in the purple. Very nice touch. It is also very easy to read. That said, I think you should have varied up the font some and perhaps added some texture to it as well. It is also stacked a tad oddly, meaning it could have been made more compact.