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*RainDelay 1/12 - RainDelay - 01-14-2020 *RainDelay 1/12 - Nokazoa - 01-22-2020 4/5, 4/5 3.5, 3.5/5 - 3.55m - 1 and 2: Strongest of the group by far. Good backgrounds and jersey swaps with small issues, like McDavid's helmet not matching up with the saturated purple and Ramos a tad lacking with lights and shadows. 3: It is just a really dark and grungy sig that hides a lot of the work done, and the text colors being so saturated compared to the rest of the sig feels like a beginners oversight. 4: It is a mix of both groups thus the grade. It has a real weak and grungy background, and your render comes off as a tad washed out due to the fact the phot had very strong lighting I guess? Your "swoops" though are nice. Text is very weak to me, because of how thin it is. I don't know if widening it out could have saved it, but I think that sort of font needs to contrast with a different font. Not be the main piece.