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Esa77 6/04 - Esa77 - 05-30-2017
![[Image: AqoPaF.jpg]](http://imagizer.imageshack.com/img922/3396/AqoPaF.jpg)
![[Image: Terrell_Davis11.jpg]](http://s11.postimg.org/lislmxi4z/Terrell_Davis11.jpg)
Esa77 6/04 - NUCK - 06-10-2017
Sig A: 3
This seems to be a step back from your previous work.I like the idea you used to blend the light source with the background. I feel that the background is just to plain. It really could benefit from some texture layers and blending.
$450,000
Sig B: 4
Well done with the background on this one, I can see the effort you put in to get the effect. Lighting needs to be toned down and made to look more natural. The render is very poorly placed ( dont trade me ) it needs to bee to one side or the other, or larger by quiet a bit. Theres a rule of thirds, the best placement of a render usaly is in the left or right third of the signature.
$600,000
The lines represent where the render should be placed, give or take.
![[Image: 021a70c5f04d1bb20748427b54d977f6.png]](https://i.gyazo.com/021a70c5f04d1bb20748427b54d977f6.png)
Total: $1,050,000
Esa77 6/04 - Esa77 - 06-11-2017
(06-10-2017, 01:17 AM)NUCK Wrote:Sig A: 3
This seems to be a step back from your previous work.I like the idea you used to blend the light source with the background. I feel that the background is just to plain. It really could benefit from some texture layers and blending.
$450,000
Sig B: 4
Well done with the background on this one, I can see the effort you put in to get the effect. Lighting needs to be toned down and made to look more natural. The render is very poorly placed ( dont trade me ) it needs to bee to one side or the other, or larger by quiet a bit. Theres a rule of thirds, the best placement of a render usaly is in the left or right third of the signature.
$600,000
The lines represent where the render should be placed, give or take.
Total: $1,050,000
Thanks for the info and payout, appreciate it, all good, very fair.
What's funny about sig 2 is it's not a render that I placed in there... with my skill level or lack there of lol, it's a straight photo which I doctored to blur the background around him and bring davis to the forefront with a little effect lol.
