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.Broken 6/4 - .Broken - 05-30-2017 .Broken 6/4 - Bengals1Fan - 06-06-2017 First one looks good! Submission A: 5/5 - 750K I wish the text on this one stood out a bit more but it looks good. Submission B: 5/5 - 750K Stock work is good, but this one is way too blue. On Tomlinson one the Render stands out a bit, here the Render is hidden behind Blue. A good way to fix this is darken the background up a bit, so the Render can be blue. Since it's a USC render I get that you're trying to correct that. Use Adjustment layers like Hue and Clip Mask them to the Render. Submission C: 4/5 - 600K The Worst of the Bunch. This one took a lot of reading. Think I read the text 4 times to figure out what it says, again way too green. This one needs some work and when we look at what you can do with #1 and 2 this ones a bit confusing BG work is decent though. Submission D: 4/5 - 600K TOTAL: 2.7 M