07-09-2019, 05:21 PM
(This post was last modified: 07-28-2019, 10:27 PM by Bigred1580.)
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This is top notch stuff. especially the copperhead logo, i really like how you did that. Been checking out your other stuff already graded, heck I really like the one you made for me. In my opinion when done right, using no background, essentially making the website itself the background, can be a sweet effect. Don't stop doing that. You are almost there with this one.
I have one criticism, that the render's head seems a tad cropped off. If you had a dark background, it'd be no issue because it gives a defined boarder of what is and isn't inside the graphic. But since you're using the "whole web page" as the "background" you gotta be more careful about what is cropped, and because the head being "cut off" is unnatural my eyes keep going back to there instead of all the more important parts. ![]()
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The background is on fire! I absolutely love it. One of your best, from the render to the snake to the lightning, I love it! Your text looks fine and the blurry background of it helps it blend. My biggest problem with the sig and the reason for the lower grade is the render. Three main complaints. Duilio pointed out one, and that is the render cuts off at the top of the head. I agree with him that negative backgrounds look super sweet but you go need to be careful with where the render ends. The second thing is the logo removal on the shirt. It looks more like a just a big blur in over the top of the old logos. lastly, the way you put the copperheads logo on the shirt. It is a tough thing to get right, especially when each have different resolutions. Try messing with the opacity of the logo, and recoloring it. Basically, just mess around with different effects to altering the logo layer until it begins to blend with the jersey. DM with any questions about this. @KillKillKill ![]() ![]() |
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