*Bubba Twatford's Kaiseki - 3 Set Meal - 1/27

Bubba Twatford · (This post was last modified: 01-27-2020, 08:22 PM by Bubba Twatford.)

I hope your eyes enjoyed the feast I prepared!

Nate Swift wanted it to feel spooky!
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Jerome Davis wanted to capture the essence of dominance!
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Saba Donut wanted a speedy sig with his team's colours!
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Nokazoa · 02-15-2020, 09:47 PM

Sig 1: 4/5 - 1m - Not as cohesive as the other two, as it needs a few more adjustment layers, and some play with the lighting. The render isn't really blending with the signature, and I would have moved the text up some. It is oddly placed with so much space above it. I am also not sure on the logo being part of the face. It's a good idea, and I like the overall mood, but I am not sure if it works overall.

Sig 2: 5/5 - 1.5m - Strongest one by far, good work.

Sig 3: 4.5/5 - 1.25m - Good work overall. I think the text placement is good, but the text feels very small. Almost too small that it feels wedged in there. I think you used the blur effect well. I would have liked to see a jersey swap to be honest. Also, again, you could have added some soft light layers with black and white. Small thing that goes very far. I was torn on this one with the other graders. We decided to split the difference on it.

Payout= 3.75m