Crib, much better that your first!
3/5 for the 1st. love the extra work on the jersey and the paintbrush effect everywhere. What I want you to start working on is blending of your text. Try adding solid color semi transparent layers to your images and adding layers to your text.
2/5 for the other 2. Go job changing the helmet logos, but I would work on trying to get your logo better angled with the render. It looks odd when all the linemen and qbs have it in the same plane.
DM with any questions
3/5 for the 1st. love the extra work on the jersey and the paintbrush effect everywhere. What I want you to start working on is blending of your text. Try adding solid color semi transparent layers to your images and adding layers to your text.
2/5 for the other 2. Go job changing the helmet logos, but I would work on trying to get your logo better angled with the render. It looks odd when all the linemen and qbs have it in the same plane.
DM with any questions
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