4.5/5 1.25mil For me the biggest issue is the mountain background coming into the render faces. It is a tad too noticeable for me in this instance. I think going over where in intersects the face with either an eraser or layer mask on low opacity may have helped it out. You also have the cloud effect hitting the canvas edge. A small thing, but at this stage, it is all small things.
4/5. 1mil So for one, I like it a lot but there isn't much there. I think the text being bisected works, and your color/saturation is in a good place. The background isn't conflicting with the render much either. However, I don't understand why you didn't do more to the render. You could have added the logo to the collar or maybe done something with some of the Yet's other colors. I suppose I understand why, and it is a really clean render, aside from the elbow that was in the shadowed.
4/5. 1mil So for one, I like it a lot but there isn't much there. I think the text being bisected works, and your color/saturation is in a good place. The background isn't conflicting with the render much either. However, I don't understand why you didn't do more to the render. You could have added the logo to the collar or maybe done something with some of the Yet's other colors. I suppose I understand why, and it is a really clean render, aside from the elbow that was in the shadowed.