2/5 400k Composition wise its just not a lot there and I feel some of the elements struggle to work together. I think the background doesn't have a lot there, for the most part, is contrasts a lot with the render too much to work. Maybe a more abstract background would have worked here. There is some render editing, but it doesn't do enough to bump this up. You also have a style that I think needs to be tweaked on occasion for the different concepts you have going for it. The "Videl-San" font is one you use a lot, but it isn't one that helps a lot being in the bottom corner. With it being in that perspective it is asking to be higher in the piece. The black "Chicago butchers" text is fine for the most part. The only issue is when it overlaps the render and gets hard to read with the drop shadows. I would also lower your opacity with the drop shadows in general. The last thing is the colors. I would say that the blue background, that lightens up in a gradient, works with that particular color combination going in the foreground.