*Hall's Submissions 3/3/2020

[Hallmonitor_20]

Philly S21 Draft Sigs











Torenson



McMorris



DSFL Concept Logo

Made with Gimmy



Warren Stephens

[Nokazoa]

3.5/5 -850k
3.5/5 -850k
3/5 - 700k
3.5/5 - 850k
3/5 - 700k
4/5 -1m
4/5 -1m
2/3 - 750k
5/5 - 1.5m
Payout: 7.5m

With series, it is always hard to properly grade. Anyway I think to improve the series you just need to add some sort of overlay/gradient. That is probably your best bet. Swaps range from passable to good. For Catfish, I think you need to add some blur and film grain to the logo to have it mesh better. Torenson and McMorris are more borderline 4s. We felt there was some improvement needed, but again, with a phone app, I can't give you huge notes. Around Torenson right arm, the logo looks to obscure part of it. Just something to keep in mind.
The logo is passable. I don't find it professional but I could see a sim league using it.
Stephens is the strongest logo here, but I am actually not sure how much of this was your doing, or how much of it was the render you found. It's very strong. I'll probably get a message on this one from someone.