sapp2013 5/13

[sapp2013]

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adding another from 5/25


another one or two. I may start doing more cards like this, so the more feedback on these specifically, the better. Thanks!


@tlk742

@PigSnout

and why not throw my expansion idea on here too.


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[Nokazoa]

4/7 - $1,500,000
5/7 - $2,000,000
3/5 - $300,000
3/5 - $300,000
3/5 - $300,000
1/3 - $450,000

Total Payout: 4,850,000

Sig 1 and 2 are fine and show a lot of effort, but it lacks a lot of blending in the various elements. Adding an overlay layer can help with blending but I'd recommend color balancing instead as you lose contrast. Also, the omission of the Yeti Logo for SIG 1 is saddening as you have a great render to add it to in some form.

Since you wanted feedback on the cards, I can go more in-depth. For the cards, I would suggest doing a few things. One is finding a theme for the cards. Right now, you have some nice font and border work that comes off more old school classic. Yet the space background and render work are more modern. Another thing for cards is due to the lower threshold in grading compared to the signatures, your cuts and swaps are more noticeable. See around Bly Jr's arm, how the cut gets choppy, or how Tweed's dual swap ( a very nice idea) isn't in a straight line, or how none of the swaps have the team branding anywhere on the jersey. It is a lot of small mistakes but it does add up. Lastly, I think you shouldn't use the overlay here. It makes your colors lose themselves.

For the logo, it is fine though most teams would go for a less abstract version of what I assume is a milk man?

If you have questions about you grade can message myself or @caltroit_red_flames, or submit your submission for arbitration here: http://nsfl.jcink.net/index.php?showtopic=21685

[caltroit_red_flames]

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Total: $4,850,000