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RainDelay · (This post was last modified: 12-04-2019, 01:30 AM by Rising Equinox.)

Rising Equinox · 12-04-2019, 01:27 AM

Really nice work all around here. I really like seeing the unique styles that people incorporate into their graphics, and your style is definitely noticeable here. I like it! I'll grade these from the top down.

(4/5 - $1M) Really nice work with this one. Definitely the best of the three sigs. Not really any noticeable problems in the render, jersey recoloring, or background. The style that you chose is simple, yet detailed, and focuses on the colors to catch the eye, and it does a fantastic job at that. If I could change anything about it though, it would probably be the text. If it was moved over to the left just a bit so that it wasn't so close to the render outline, that would be much better. Also, the font for the first name seems like kind of an odd choice, considering the block-like font of the last name. Other than those few things, really nice work.

(3.5/5 - $850k) Still great work, just a few more noticeable things here than in the first. Again, I love the simple, yet colorful and eye-catching style. I like the font of this text more than the first, but it doesn't really pop as much as the first. I think a different choice for the stroke/outline around the text, such as white, would have made the text stand out a lot more and really really brought the whole thing together. The only other thing I notice is the slight overlap of the render outline over the text. This could easily be fixed by just moving the render just a tiny bit to the right. Not a huge problem at all, but it's enough for me to notice it.

(3.5/5 - $850k) Similar to the ideas in the one above, just somewhat different circumstances. It doesn't quite catch the eye as much as the other two. I feel like the background is a little dark in comparison to the others, which isn't necessarily a bad thing at all. It could definitely work, but with the text and render having somewhat darker colors and shading as well, nothing really pops out here. I honestly just feel like brightening it all up a bit could help out with this one.